Get on the Griddle
Skirmish: Hunger, thirst, desire, c... (@robinleaf)Liner Notes
#acousticonetake #acousticrock That feeling when you want to eat, but you want to write a song. This song reminds me of Paul McCartney maybe ten years ago.
Lyrics
Get on the griddle Marshmallow middle Guitar and a riddle This time This time
Rhythm in the kitchen Writer on a mission Chorus and a verse Feed yourself first
Turn it up higher Fingers on a wire Searching for a rhyme Two things at a time
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I like how you bring attention to the small details which tell the story, "Fingers on a wire, Searching for a rhyme" are really nice lines. :)
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Love the playful lyrics! Great skirmish track!
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Nice job capturing the vibe of trying to juggle two things at the same time. I like the lively guitar rhythm too.
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I get the McCartney vibe too, which is a good thing! Awesome chords. Enjoyed listening. Made me a little hungry, though.