!Yo Ma’am Oy!
by @clenig17
Challenge: PALINDROMELiner Notes
Well ended up with a snow day today. I decided to tackle the weekly challenge. I may have taken this to an extreme🤣 Other than the Rap this is entirely a Palindrome…musically, lyrically and in form. I thought let’s bring some Bartok to a pop song and I wrote this in Arch form as an homage to Bartok’s Concerto for Orchestra. I am sure no one listening would ever pick up on that but it was fun to try!
Lyrics
!Yo,Ma’am, Oy!
Yo, ma’am Oy V1 Madam kayak Madam Level Redder level Was it a Cat I saw? Was it a Cat I saw?
V2 I, man am regal; A German am I Too hot to hoot Too hot to hoot
Chorus Racecar Sagas Sex at noon taxes Do geese see god? Do geese see god?
Chorus Do geese see god? Do geese see god? Sex at noon taxes Sagas racecar
V2 Too hot to hoot Too hot to hoot I am man regal A German am I
V1 Was it a cat I saw? Was it a cat I saw? Level redder level Madam kayak madam
Ti kcehc
Yo ma’am oy
Rap:
Look up now come on Too hot to hoot Too hot to hoot It wasn’t you Tool But wouldn’t you Spill the beans if you did really know what it means What it means What it means take a loss On the game piss away All those gains Maybe it’s just Better that way
Comments
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Damn, dude! This is awesome on multiple levels. Great production ideas too.
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That's rad. How many palindrome can you put into a song? And it's funky... while having weird Radiohead vibes.
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This is so cool! I love all those changes here! Brilliant vocals and rap! Really enjoyed this!
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It works on so many levels.