It's Not True

by @berni1954

Skirmish: Make it your own (please ... (@robinleaf)

Liner Notes

This one is a fun piece for the "Make it your own!" skirmish

I have kept much of the original rhyme scheme and the basic structure. I reckon many of you will be able to guess the source for this. The original is almost a dirge, I gave it a more upbeat folky feel

INSTRUMENT 3/4 Spanish Guitar by Hora (of Romania) #folk #makeityourown #Skirmish

Lyrics

It's not true! You're making me mad! It's not true! You're just making me sad! You're making me mad! You're making me mad!

It's not true! I think you've been had It's not true! Your informant's bad So says my i-Pad So says my i-pad

It's not true! Your information's not rad It's not true! Your sum's do not add You're inventing, you cad! You're inventing, you cad!

You're such a Jessie! Such a Jessie! It's got all messy That's as true as Nessie You're such a Jessie!

REPEAT VERSE ONE

Comments

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I have to love a character seeking truth but arguing from pop culture. The references are apt and entertaining. The song as a whole is compact and holds its focus.

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catchy classic progression and rhythm. a really cool skirmish

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@mikeb

An old-timey feel with that guitar sound, nice skirmish work!

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It has a touch of 'putting on the ritz' or anything goes, so I imagine that wasn't your source song :) Great movement and I like how you leave the lyrics open and interpretable - great groove.

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@mikegtz

I think I wrote my shirmish song on a similar theme. What is a Jessie? I think I know what Nessie is-any relation? Cute and catchy.

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This is great and so catchy!

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This is so jaunty I love it

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