Narrow Shoulders
by @carleybaer · @tcelliott
NSFWLiner Notes
carley says: @tcelliott was kind enough to supply me with a lyric, and I always love an excuse to dust off the ol' 90s basement show sound.
tc sez: And Carley knocked it out of the park. I absolutely love what she's done.
Lyrics
It's been a bad day And I don't have time for your crap I wish you'd go away Vanish in a single snap
And I'm tired of all your shit x2
The worries of the world are heavy And I need someone to help with the weight But if you offered to help me I'm afraid your narrow shoulders might break
I heard you complain It seems that's all you can do You shift all the blame So none of it lands on you
And we're all tired of your shit x2
The worries of the world are heavy And I need someone to help with the weight But if you offered to help me I'm afraid your narrow shoulders might break
br: It's not that I don't like it here I'm almost never in tears But let me be crystal clear I wish you would disappear
Because the worries of the world are heavy And I need someone to help with the weight But if you offered to help me I'm afraid your narrow shoulders might break
Comments
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Multi listen for me, I kept hearing more and more subtlety in the vocal harmonies, so awesome! Great stuff!
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Close enough, welcome back The Breeders. Memes aside, this is great! Very fun sound, great vocals, great combo of lyrics and feel.
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Great combination of talent here! It is a upbeat song on a less-than-upbeat topic. Great job all around.
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Great lyric and I LOVE the vocals in this! Really, really terrific collaboration! ❤️
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How can this message sound so uplifting and fun? The phrasing is so good. Absolutely enjoyed it
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This is fun reminds me of bright vibrant colorful home with some one there just discovered doomscrolling! LoL! Love the whole package: Great lyric, concise and to the point, wonderful composition, vox, performance and production - It's a hit in my book!! Great collab!
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nice one- great job, both of you! fun and incisive lyric and music fits it well- great performance too!
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So melodic, rythmic and light! It all works perfectly together. The lead vocal with backing vocals are so smooth, loved it!
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This has a fun chugga chugga sound of TV Show theme songs ala Friends or iCarley that I love. It also has the appealing innocent sneer of a Susanna Hoff video. Teeny bopper pop with all the right amounts of beat melody, and attitude.