Semaphore
by @sadloaf
Liner Notes
draft title "casiopwned for the pwnfully pwned"
Lyrics
Lately I’ve been holding up
A semaphore
And hoping you could read me
Tired arms that hopefully
Are pointing in the right direction now
Nasty work if you can get it
I’ve thrown out my back
Like I’m supposed to
In case of emergency
Just hold the biggest parts of me aloft
I wish that there was time To wither on the vine But I am waiting for the words To do their job
Lately I’ve been tapping toes And blinking eyes like I’ve been taken hostage Crushed under a century of People who knew how to make a point And I’ll admit when I am wrong I thought that if I packaged it all nicely That I would be immune To the pitfalls I excel at pointing out
I wish there was a way Meaningfulness could stay But the vessel that I’m on Is taking off
Flaghoist A voice Too long Wind breaks Attempts At song
I wish I had the thought Back when when the line was taut But the respite that I earned Is leaking out I wish that you could sense The meaning that I meant But meaningful semantics Have run out.
Comments
Melody, lyrics and performance blend perfectly.
oh wow this is my type of jam. your voice is so cool and the melody is awesome. thank you
Gorgeous soft keyboard sounds! Love the twinkly arpeggios that pop up to accentuate certain sections. Beautiful melancholy feel throughout, I guess the draft title might not have been the best fit for the vibe but it's pretty damn funny.
Utterly gorgeous. Your voice is so painfully plaintive and perfect for the song. So many brilliant lines. Stand out: "Crushed under a century of People who knew how to make a point" but the whole things tells a sad and beautiful story. Thank you!
i'm not sure if I can even begin to express (ha) how much these lyrics resonate with me (painfully). how are they not seeing it? i'm also not sure if i can even give an actual critique of any kind besides that; the feeling is drowning it all out. i love it (obviously). okay done being weird for now bye (oh god am i one of the pwnfully pwned)