Nightmare
by @kdogg
Liner Notes
Just trying to work it out some feelings to the insanity that is reality now. I think this needs to be a lot faster and of course it needs some drums. I have a hard time keeping time without drums. But that gives it some character and you know for sure this is not AI. lol Rough draft y'all. Words and patterns subject to change, but I wanted to get something down. Cuz I'm a leetle beeehind getting things posted.
Lyrics
In the sky hope to die up high up high
On the ground all around we fall we fall
Overwhelmed going numb day after day day after day
It's a take over Can we stay sober In money we trust In money we trust
It's a nightmare It's a nightmare You do solemnly swear You do solemnly swear
Saving yourself No one else with your lies lies lies lies
We made you We can break you We are coming to take you down
We made you We can break you We are coming to take you down
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@kdogg - do it! Make it faster and louder!
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I like this - guitar sound and vocals are great, has a verruca salt vibe for me. Alt 90s ftw! Can hear this rocking hard with a drum track under it
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@iwilleatyou Thanks! I'll try to clean up the track a bit. The timing is a bit wonky. It'd be great to give it some muscle. I feel like it should be a little faster and louder but I always think that.
This is good! If you need drums and bass let me know. All i need is the vocal and guitar track or stems if you want me to mix it. Have it at the speed you want and let me know the bpm of the song. Also at least a four bar count in. Off the bat I'd stretch the song a tad. Maybe sing the chorus again.
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I love this - it’s so cool, it sounds like the Breeders. I’m totally jealous of this song. I wish I still had a drum kit as I’d love to crash along to this. I have song envy now. Must go and pick up my guitar and think alternative 90s..
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Really nice vocals and guitar! I really like the melody and lyrics.
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You do such a great job at the vocal layering. It's something I need to experiment more with. I think I've just been inspired.