I really like the guitar and bass at 1:15 in. I think you should have Pawel Trojanowski sing over this.... that's what's missing

I feel like there is 2 maybe 3 really good cores of songs mashed together here. The intro really rocks and sounded like we were headed for a head banger, then the bridge had a real catch rhythmic feel to it that would make a good basis for a pop tune. The last section felt very Jazz and I loved how it felt like we had just gone through a genre journey in 2 minutes. Great stuff!