The write a letter blues

by @sheilerk · @robinleaf

Skirmish: Letter to your future sel... (@rinwolf)
There is no demo for this song.

Liner Notes

Lyrics

Sat down to write a letter, Couldn't get you off my mind, Sat down to write a letter, Couldn't get you off my mind. So I wrote a letter to myself but I left the thing unsigned.

I said I was a fool, And that was not untrue, I said I was a fool, And that was not untrue, People tell me I'm a genius, but I've been a fool for you.

Got the sit down, grab a pen and write a letter Blues Take myself and shake myself and make me see the truth, I'm just a fool With the write a letter blues.

Don't know where I'll mail it, Cuz I don't know where I'll be. Don't know where I'll mail it, Cuz I don't know where I'll be, But I sure know where I won't be, With you standin' next to me.

Got the open my eyes, stop listenin' to lies, and write a letter Blues, Got the tell myself, yell at myself, get out of my own way Blues, I've got the Blues, Got the write a letter Blues.

Next time I write a letter, It's gonna start out with Dear John. Next time I write a letter, It's gonna start out with Dear John, Cuz Honey I got a letter to myself Said I been hangin' on too long!

I got the Woke up, toked up, and read my letter Blues, I got the See it now, clear somehow, I'm Walkin' out on you, No more Blues, And no more cryin' over you! No more Blues, Because I got the letter, Blues

Blues, blues blues blues, We're done here

Comments

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Nice lyric. Drop me a line when the music drops. I like that the lyric is set up in a blues style but the way the words read, it has a nice folky poetic storytelling feel to the words.

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@rinwolf

Lots of blues energy! Great lines here. I can already tell this is gonna be an awesome track :D

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Fantastic take on the prompt with both insight and wit. It flows off the page beautifully. I like how empowering it feels.

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That classic structure and a bit of humor to boot—I like how you've worked the "letter to myself" into a... punchline isn't the right word, but the line that changes course with snark. Fun write!

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Love it. I particularly like the "don't know where I'll mail it/ cuz I don't know where I'll be" repetition.

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OMG this is GREAT. I can just hear it. I know it's way too late for me to actually get a demo done before the end, but I've never actually written a blues song and I really want to try! I love so much of this but I think the first stanza is my favorite.

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