Oh I really like this! I didn't realize at first that it was a breakup song. And it sounds a little bit unsure. Like the narrator knows it's done but isn't putting their foot down about it. I like how you say, "As the sun goes down / Or the sun comes up"... Because sometimes these things take a little longer to end then you want them to!

You captured that ambivalence of something ending so beautifully, I can easily hear the meter and yes, it could be about many things besides the end of FAWM. Nice finale to the month!

I feel like this would lend itself easily to music, and the subject is broad enough to apply to a number of different scenarios. As for Fawm, I’m glad there are a few more days before we wrap up the reading and listening at least 😊

This sentiment certainly applies to FAWM closing up shop (for now) but is certainly applicable to lots of different situations, too (e.g.,a relationship ending). It seems like this could go various ways musically...'hope someone jumps on it.

One final lyric and a great send off / wrap up. This feels really versatile to me like it could go in any direction musically.

I like how you present the opposites. Wrap up the evening or wrap up an all night bender. I felt some punk rock energy from this!

#Tit4tat There’s a beautiful, reflective quality to the lyrics that captures a sense of closure but still wondering if there’s still more to say. Perfect for creating a music bed because it can go in many directions. Well done this FAWM!

I really like the sentiment. Very conversational! The song structure is great too. Good job!