She Was
by @copperhead
Liner Notes
I usually write and perform rap so this was totally new and experimental for me!
#indie #indierock #alternativerock #rock #singer #pop #hiphop #rap
Lyrics
She was the light in my life She was the stars in the sky She was all I could see She was everything to me
You never quite know When love is gonna find you Even on the darkest days It shines right through You gave me your heart You got mine too Cannot imagine what I'd do Without you It's true I would lose My cool
She was the light in my life She was the stars in the sky She was all I could see She was everything to me She was the light in my life She was the stars in the sky She was all I could see She was everything to me
Every evening, day, night, or morning Loving my girl is never boring There's so much to you worth adoring Spending time with you feels like soaring Through The great blue Just us two Me and you I can't count all the time I've spent With thoughts of you running through my head Before you the nightmares they came and went They're gone the moment you're in my bed Lying next to you, I feel safer Caring for you is in my nature My love will never falter or waver 'Til the day that I meet my maker
She was the light in my life She was the stars in the sky She was all I could see She was everything to me She was the light in my life She was the stars in the sky She was all I could see She was everything to me
(instrumental interlude)
She was the light in my life She was the stars in the sky She was all I could see She was everything to me She was the light in my life She was the stars in the sky She was all I could see She was everything to me
Comments
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Sounds like a successful experiment to me! I like the way you fluctuate your pitch at the end of the chorus lines, very satisfying and def gives you that alternative/indie feel. The chorus itself is also super catchy, found myself humming along to them when listening. Great work!
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Nice indie feel to this! . The lyrics poor out really nicely.
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Great production and driving drums - you can see Rap feel. Nice one.
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Nice! This are some super sweet lyrics. My partner, @liamlieblein is also usually doing rap but is trying to branch out this FAWM! I love when people use FAWM to try new things. Nice work!
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This is very well put together. The combination of sung and rapped delivery works well and gives the track a good dynamic. Nice work.