Terminal Lucidity
by @alanonymous
Liner Notes
#dance #rock #indie #vocals #alternative #altrock
I tried a bunch of different ideas for the chorus before deciding to just make it a choppy dance section
Lyrics
Blasphemy Terminal lucidity
Raise me like a catafalque To the crest of your iliac
I should have learned your lesson I should have watched the video Another chance for first impressions it goes down fast but it comes back slow
Anatomy Portioned out as luxury Laid before in absolution Punctuating the conclusion
I should have seen the arrow I shouldn't have caught it in my thigh I offer it back with hands abducted My palms are beckoning the sky
Comments
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I love how the song builds. At the start, it reminded me of The Shins and by the end It was something totally different with so much drive. I found your song by searching “Indie rock” and was not disappointed! Nice job!
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Awesome chorus! The tone is ripping on those guitars. "My palms are beckoning the sky" is a good line.
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Love the chopping of your vocals! All the parts are distinct but have a purpose. I'm digging your work and keeping an eye out for the rest of the month, you've got yourself a fan.