The Hopeful Romantic
Liner Notes
A gift song—one of those that just shows up, lyrics and all. It’s in 5/4, which keeps things interesting. I wanted a break from full production, and I always include at least one acoustic track. I am in the zone, already halfway. #singersongwriter #acoustic #indiefolk #folk #folkpop
Lyrics
Verse 1 For many you are there So much you will share Answered all their prayers Getting married in the square
Some find you easily Like they’re turning a key Eventually I gave up the dream
Chorus 1 You skipped over Left me colder Yes, I am free But I don’t wanna be
Verse 2 You all give advice Like you are so wise You should realize Luck was on your side
Logic has no place No reason for my fate But I have today And you may come my way
Chorus 2 I am open I’m not broken Yes, I am free And I will still believe
Comments
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I'm enjoying your lyrical writing. You have a gift there, and your guitar and vocal work pay off wonderfully. Great ending!
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I love songs in 5/4 and am impressed with anyone who can write one (especially so well). It both drives and keeps things off-kilter. I like the shift in the chorus from "I don't wanna be" to "I will still believe."
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Always cool when an odd time signature sounds so natural. It really catches your ear! Like calligraphy.
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The panned acoustics sound gorgeous. Love those chords in the chorus, and that they're not full-on major key type things, which would have made the words sounds perhaps too bombastic. Particularly in the context of the first chorus, where there seems to be a bit of nuance in the 'don't wanna be' line. Short and sweet man, great write. The ones that fall out fully formed are always good! 5/4 - you're a braver man than I.
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This has a nice lean forward feel to it - if that makes any sense. Sweet sound on the guitar, and sung quite well. One day I will escape 4/4, but that day will not be today...
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a short and sweet proclamation of freedom from the negativity surrounding. not quite a joyous song, but imbued with a personal optimism that won me over. the guitar arrangement is unique and keeps the lyrics nicely syncopated.
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5/4! Yes. Nice stripped back arrangement with vocal and guitar. Great listen. 🙌🎶