Memory of Heat
by @dhiatt
Liner Notes
Inspired by the feeling of being cold in bed. Yuck! Originally this was going to be called "Cold Bodies," but the phrase "memory of heat" popped into my head as a button for the chorus as I was working on the melodies.
I like quite a bit of this one, but it feels a bit half-baked. Particularly as it shares a lot of elements of Bathysphere. Suggestions and criticism welcome.
Lyrics
In days before I’d reach for you Our shared warmth would multiply Now neither of us has the heat On this bed we divide
There was a night that brought us here One of us touched off a flame Set off a spark, burned all the fuel Don’t even remember who to blame
So we each walk alone
Now we seek release Our cold bodies walk these streets Searching for something to kindle our fire A memory of heat
In days before I’d be there When you came to bed Now it’s just your perfume Lingers there instead
You hunt alone
Now we seek release Our cold bodies walk these streets Searching for something to kindle our fire A memory of heat
Will it always be this way The two of us in the dark It would take a spark But I can’t generate one
Now we seek release Our cold bodies walk these streets Searching for something to kindle our fire A memory of heat
Comments
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I really like the vocal melody, and the complex interplay of rhythms between the drums and guitars. Don’t be shy, you’re an exellent player and singer! I would like to hear the parts at the same volume in the mix, as is, your guitars and drums loses impact, and they are important in this genre to get a sense of drive. Try use the meters in your daw to balance the tracks equal, it’s really good stuff!
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I'm originally from Sudan, so you had me at "heat", and I agree with you, I like "memory of heat" as the song title, very catchy! And I love all the 'heat' references through out the lyrics! Well done.
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It's a great theme - I have friends and family in Massachusetts and Canada that are always freezing, seeking heat and friends and family in Florida, trying to cool off. But then, the underlying meaning where we're searching for love and companionship really draws the listener in. I love the guitar work. Your voice is really dark, which gives it a bit of a dangerous edge to it.
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Some great lyrics in here - on this bed we divide is probably my favourite line. I kind of know what you mean - the arrangement doesn't quite seem to serve the song. But you have something here, and I wouldn't give up on it. One to put aside and leave to mature in the vaults.
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Love the intro guitar - I get musical synesthesia with that feeling of being ill in bed. When it kicks in it's almost feverish in delivery. Great work!