Toes

by @hmstreetteam

Skirmish: Write a truly soppy love ... (@ajna1960)
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Liner Notes

#lyricsonly #lovesong Soppy love song? Could I also make it true to life, and make it ridiculous, and make it rhyme? Easy for you to say!

Lyrics

I love the way you wiggle your toes Your shadow is surely a model I love the way your fingers close Without looking at that water bottle My love for you only grows I love the way you wiggle your toes

I love the way you say so many words so effortlessly And the way you explain human nature I love the way you chase down every possibility And I love to watch your eyes dart and flicker You will forever be precious to me I love the way you say so many words

So effortlessly

Comments

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Lovely love song lyrics.

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Right down to the toes! That's a fine detail. Very nice take on the prompt.

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@liz561

I like how you start with the mundane and then grow into the more intimate characteristics. Add some music!

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Okay, this is pretty adorable. I think noticing those little things is an important part of loving someone. The little details of toe wiggling or the way the person closes their hand around a bottle of water, the se can be kind of precious. I think you've captured it really well. Nice skirmish!

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