A Pretty Lie
Skirmish: Fun with a random word li... (@robinleaf)Liner Notes
I let my computer randomly select five words from the selection given. Those words were: flock feather sing strike boast
So my first thought was that every word kind of fits with a bird theme and I don't really know where to take that as I don't like being obvious with my lyrics. Now as I read it, these are to inspire, I don't have to use each word in the song but I probably will use most of them
"I saw your face / I want to be a bird. / Try to avoid the jungle." ~wise words from google translate after multiple translations
Lyrics
I think you worry too much about the weather I think you try to find too many patterns In the colors on a feather Do I wanna drag you out of here? Do I wanna drag you out of here?
Oh, she struck me, what's that you said? You love me? Well that's a pretty lie Don't need to tell me why Cause I know it's justified
Oh it's not, my fault That people gravitate towards their own kind Well I'm not, anyone's kind Or even mine for as far as I know And I wish we could turn out alright
Oh, she struck me, what's that you said? You love me? Well that's a pretty lie Don't need to tell me why Cause I know it's justified
Oh, you probably think I'm strange With the way I lay out the table cloth And that I count each grain of salt
And you know that I only want you attention And you know that I boast about what I pretend to have Of what you're dragging behind your back Of what you say like but have never had Those were the words I wish I never said
(Because now you know my secret)
Oh, she struck me, what's that you said? You love me? Well that's a pretty lie (Sing it with me) Oh, she struck me, what's that you said? You love me? Well that's a pretty lie Don't need to tell me why Cause I know it's justified
Comments
I'd love to hear this set to music. I read it as a song about abuse but maybe you meant it differently.
That’s an especially strong chorus, bouncing around in both rhythm and narrative. People will have to hear it several times.
These lyrics are sure intriguing. I think this could be a very fun song to make a tune for because the rhythm is not too regular and there appear to be layers of meaning, although that might not have been intended. I would be interested to listen if it gets a tune. #tit4tat