Very atmospheric! I love the soft insistence of this. It fits the theme so well.

I love everything about this, the idea/s your voice, your style and especially the lines "I'll haunt you til you die Which won't be long now" Yes! So good! So much enjoyed, have got brave enough to wonder if you might consider making music for one of my lyrics which could possibly suit - have emailed you :)

Wonderfully strange and thought provoking song.

Clever use of the prompt! I personally like the recording. Thank you so much for participating.

Ooh I haven't had a first person narrative from a dead person in my life since the opening shots of "Sunset Boulevard". In the Spanish translation of which the poor translator didn't have the script and had to pick out what was said. This led to a brilliant mishearing: The dead body in the pool has a voice over narrator which states: "My death will come as a shock to the Hollywood Columnists..." Our poor translator must have been unaware of this synonym for journalists and the subtitle read, in Spanish; "My death was a shock for the Hollywood Communists" - that changed the entire premise of the film 😉

Nice! A first person murder body is such a cool and creepy idea. And the haunting music made it even creepier.

Cool vibe. Very personal. Neat point of view! I like the angry ghost perspective.

This is really haunting and impactful given the unique perspective in the lyric and your amazing musical delivery. Brilliant take on the prompt!

Impressive work in SST (Skirmish Standard Time). You've become a ghost...what a great take on the prompt!