The Finish Line

by @alyak72

Skirmish: The Finish Line (@robinleaf)

Liner Notes

Happy FAWM everyone!

#girlwithpiano #skirmish

Lyrics

We saw it coming a long way back Right before our eyes, the facade cracked Now we admit the time is nigh We're at the finish line

Don't cry because it's over Don't cry because it's done Don't cry because you'll miss me I'm sorry that I'm not the one

Don't mourn for the future Don't yearn for the past The truth is we Were never meant to last

Comments

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@frostin

vocals sound great and the harmonies add so much depth. Melody had a sort of folk tune vibe, but with the synths it's totally different. Like it!

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@mtanguay

Wow! I love this expansive sound, and those harmonies are beautiful! This is a quick shot to the heart. So good!

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This is a great ballad, I love the piano part, it's trancy and really draws you in This is so applicable to so many things even though the prompt was about fawm ending, I love the I'm sorry I'm not the one line, and the we're never meant to last, that's just great.

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Wow, this is beautiful!! Your vocals are enchanting! Love that piano music so much! Your lyrics are such a great take on the skirmish prompt! Really lovely work on this!!!

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Oh that's a strong tune, put me in mind of Nyman's theme to The Piano. Concise but it says all it needs to, and the harmony on the last line is sweeeeet 😃

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@clioem

Wow, an epic ballad in a little over an hour! Beautiful work, with a 90s sweep!

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