Thinkin' on It

by @sheilerk

There is no demo for this song.

Liner Notes

#needsmusic #lyricsonly #flirty

@monty posted a sweet piece of music that needed lyrics. I didn't hear it until almost midnight, but I couldn't stop the words I was hearing, so here they are. It's too late to ask about a collab, maybe after fawm, but if he wants them they're his. He called it Thinkin' on It.

Here’s the link to @monty’s music that inspired the lyrics. Will be working on a demo soon. https://write.fawm.org/songs/312141

Lyrics

I'm thinkin' on it, You gave me lots to think about. I'm thinkin' on it, Maybe we can figure it out. Let's just play it all by ear And see what comes along. Meanwhile, thanks for the song.

I've been wonderin', Wond'rin' what you have in mind. Could be int'resting, Wouldn't want to be left behind. There's a once upon a time when I'd already know, But, that's a been awhile ago.

We were quite an item, When we were just seventeen. But, you're a big boy now, If ya know what I mean, And you know I'm all grown up too, There's lots of things we could do, Things we couldn't do back in High School.

Are you thinkin' on it, Thinkin' about me? Cuz I'm thinkin' on it. It's lookin' like we're both free. We could give this thing another whirl And see where it could lead If your thinkin' what I'm thinkin'...

Comments

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@ambroise

This is delicate and smirky ! Great rendering of the first wriggles of love. (Man, does it fit the weather outside ! Not even spring yet but already giddy.) This line astonished me with its humor and psychological insight: "There's a once upon a time when I'd already know, but, that's a been awhile ago. "

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I think this is a simple but loaded lyric that flows real well. A wistful We Were and now We Are take on life. Cute but a little naughty. #tit4tat

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I would love to hear how this comes out! The lyrics are perfect for the vibe of the music!! I love the casualness of it, the "well, I'm game if you are, kinda" as you look down and drag your toe in the dirt... Good luck to you and @monty putting it together!! #tit4tat

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@cathreu

I wish someone would've given me this in a note back in high school. I would've been theirs. I enjoy the casual approach of "thinkin on it." A very old-school cool way of saying "not a bad idea, ya know." Fun and sweet set of lyrics! #tit4tat

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Oh, so nice. I love how the subject of the thinkin' is cheekily revealed a little more each verse. A certain coyness to start and getting bolder. I adore the final line! #tit4tat

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@gb9

Nice. This is so pleasant, nostalgic yet futuristic. Great write.

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@monty

Oh yeah! This will work. Would be best with a female vocalist methinks. I can change the key "Thinkin' On It' as needed. https://write.fawm.org/songs/312141

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