Astonishing what you can write in an hour. Love the Johnny Cash style, you make it sound so easy. A few chuckles here, like hearing, "But I won't thank Jesus." "walked into a wall," "suck less." But mostly how you weave the same words into different meanings. All so clever. And of course, glad it ends with a moral to the story.

We bet on the same horse! Like others I love your luckless/suck less rhyme and the luck that walked into a wall. Music works great.

Love this! This song would go over well at a pub gig.

Love the clever lyrics! Can hear this being done with a full bluegrass band behind it and harmonies on the chorus.

So much fun and feels so fleshed out for a skirmish! "My luck took a walk, and walked into a wall" is probably my favorite line and encapsulates the prompt so well. The repeating "k" sound hits home the comedy of it all. Thanks for making me laugh - much needed!

I love the snark! And it's a perfect response to the skirmish prompt. I love your rhyme scheme (luckless/suck less) too.

yeah, what they said. that plunky thumpy guitar is so good. and it has been so much fun hearing your voice grow over the DECADES. (man, we's old, yeah?)

Love this, Mike. The perfect Johnny Cash song. A little confused by the last verse but otherwise perfect and "the shapeshifting animal that turns into a snail" is an excellent line!

Smash into cash mode. Very well done Mike, a singalong. Get um all singing luck of the luckless. And rhyming it with suck less. Ha ha

I have had a very long day, and This made me smile. Thank you for this.

Well, this was fun as could be. Living in conservative small towns most of my life, I just got to know some Jewish friends this past year living in a bigger Metropolitan area, My first time in a synagogue was in December. I played bass for a group of ladies performing Bare Naked Ladies Lights of Hanukkah song.

"The luck of the luckless" is a great line. I also love the "suck less" rhyme, ha! Great little turns of phrases and lovely song in general. Nice skirmishing