Silver Lining

by @becooljanele

Liner Notes

Lyrics

I’m on my toes when you walk in the room The air fills with your stifling perfume Plagued with your bitter and woeful gloom Can’t count the tears you cry

Behind dark glasses, your eyes dance No sights for you to find romance Mankind put you in a cynical trance You feast on me like a black fly

You hurt me once, now guilt’s on you I’m beating back, you can’t get through You ain’t threatened by the things I do Moving mountains seems too high

When there’s a silver lining You’ll only mine for gold You can’t accept the changes Those little things are sold Your heart is breaking faster Glass shivers when it’s cold When there’s a silver lining You’ll only mine for gold

You make quick jabs with your plastic knife Your hands are bruised, too frail to take lives Take no time to deal with your strife Y’rather complain that I won’t die

You cut me out, the blade gets thick Quick wit, sharp, that’s the kick Should’ve stuck to your guns quick You’re just too jaded to try

When there’s a silver lining You’ll only mine for gold You can’t accept the changes Those little things are sold Your heart is breaking faster Glass shivers when it’s cold When there’s a silver lining You’ll only mine for gold

I wish you could see the light That silver brings to the eyes Always wanting something more You don’t think it qualifies But when you want some of mine You can’t loot my supplies Stubbornness can kill you you can’t deny

When there’s a silver lining You’ll only mine for gold You can’t accept the changes Those little things are sold Your heart is breaking faster Glass shivers when it’s cold When there’s a silver lining You’ll only mine for gold

Comments

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More superb vocals! The chorus on this one is catchy as a catchy thing. Some great lines too - "Mankind put you in a cynical trance / You feast on me like a black fly" is fabulous. Nice change up in the bridge, some really cool rhythmic stuff going on there. Great write!

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@beej

Such a complete song even thought it’s just guitar and vocals! You’ve got a great voice 😎

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I love the lyrics. I love all of it, but I really like the lyrics. Especially your hook. Very well said.

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@mctown

saw you were from TN... cool... nice lyrics.....agree...Americana... good to see some TN folk here... three or more that I know.. are here.

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@sycophant

Great song writing. Your voice has such emotion and a great tone… love the line “when there’s a sliver lining you’ll only mine for gold” - it’s such a poignant adage that I hadn’t heard before.

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@jinx

"When there’s a silver lining / You’ll only mine for gold" is one of those brilliant, instant-classic couplets that I wish I had written. This whole thing is fantastic!

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You have a 14 karat voice and I really like your phrasing here. It works well with your guitar playing. You hit the Mother lode.

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This is incredible. The lyrics are perfect and the music so great. Love everything about this tune

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obsessed with your vocal riffs especially on the word "high" - instant goosebumps! love your chords and lyrics as well :)

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This is a great hook, with the silver and gold contrast. I love the line "feast on me like a black fly". Very cool!

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@bee

Dark ans evocative. Love the imagery of jabs with a plastic knife and bruised hands too frail to take lives. I can’t wait to hear the demo!

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