Stones Long Weathered

by @jamkar

Liner Notes

Leaving my comfort zone and entering: #inthestyleof, #ignoredinstrument. Guitar and vocals will be coming soon.

Lyrics

Cedar shadows Fall across the creek Where we did stand There long ago The spring is bubbling I still feel that Summer sand

Chorus: It rises up Inside a ring of stones long weathered by the years It rises up Inside of me Not bothered by Our past fears

I hear laughter A game of keep away I played that game so well And now I'm left here with All that remains (chorus) I spent time Upon that mountain Thinking about You and me But then returning The answers came so freely Not in the clouds But standing here In cold rain (chorus)

Comments

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@jgale

I love a song that talks about the passage of time, and the perspectives gained. Lovely song. "And now I'm left here with/all that remains." Indeed. That ring will keep it safe, and the terrible answers always come with rain. If you live in that clime. I enjoyed the second instrumental as well--not sure if it was supposed to play in the embed?

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@wynia

I really like all the natural imagery weaving about this song; with the guitar and solo vocals it’s giving me slight camping vibes.

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@mikeb

Thanks for participating in the ignored instrument challenge! The backpacker doesn't sound bad (considering comments I have heard from others). I can imagine this performed at a campfire out in the hilly woods somewhere.

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This song instantly sets up a beautiful late afternoon melancholy. A beautiful juxtaposition of images, feelings and memories. I particularly love the line “I hear laughter, a game of keep away”. Lovely!

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@val

I'm not sure who this is in the style of, but I like the sound. It's got a definite Americana type of vibe. I like the imagery. And I feel like I could listen many times and get different interpretations and realizations from it. Good deal. But the overall theme of growing beyond what once help us back is really good one.

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Hi Michael. I hope you have a great FAWM. Great guitar, lovely vocals and sweet lyrics. I really feel the song.

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@nadine

Hey Mike, so good to hear you on the guitar. Seems like you find different chords and emotions to express. Took a while for me to get the lyrics as there are many metaphors and pictures. Good write

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Lovely Mike I think we are weathering like the stones 😄

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Love this one, and really moved by it - felt like you were singing and playing right to me. Great to hear you again!

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This song has some very tactile imagery... feet in the sand, down by the creek. Cedar shadows. I think it's a good metaphor for growing up - spending time up on the mountain to gain understanding. I like it.

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