Out Of Time

by @siebass

There is no demo for this song.

Liner Notes

#lyricsonly #commentsfirst

And ironically, now I am out of time. I signed up for this challenge on the first week of FAWM, wrote the lyrics the next day, set up the structure, have the cadence in my head, but never got back to it, like many this year. Work. Life. Many other reasons. Lo, sorry to disappoint you, my four commenters, but I hope you can at least appreciate my clever Sponge Bob references in verse two.

The song was meant to be arranged in descending time signatures to match this comments. 7/8, 6/8, 5/8, 4/8, 3/8, 2/8, and lastly 1/8. I also thought it would be neat to do a countdown in time sigs 7-6-5-4-3-2-1.

"This song is for the #CommentsFirst challenge (https://write.fawm.org/forums/3025). It doesn't exist yet. It will be written based on the first few comments it receives. Please leave a comment below!"

@cairobraga using a different time signature for each section is so bold and the result is beautiful! kudos!

@kosch Was that a Sponge Bob reference in the second verse?! Wild

@thedutchwidows Starting out in 7/8 is a bold move, but it really works!

@moonraccoon There is an intriguing delicacy to the bridge. Love that key change going into the last verse!

Lyrics

7/8 [[Starting out in 7/8 is a bold move, but it really works!]]

Eyes Burn blue light set them ablaze

Fingers Churn another quixotic page

don't forget to blink your eyes don't forget to emphasize don't forget to shred the lies don't forget open your

6/8 chorus

Eyes..... Open your Eyes Don't close your Eyes Your eyeeeesssss

5/8 Verse 2 [[Was that a Sponge Bob reference in the second verse?! Wild]]

Sponge my face down Bobbing for sighs Squares can't make circles Pants burn from the lies

Pineapple poison Under my skin The prickers I bleed out See my rotten sins

Open your

4/4 Chorus

Eyes..... Open your eyes Don't close your eyes Your eyeeeesssss

3/4 Waltz Bridge [[There is an intriguing delicacy to the bridge. Love that key change going into the last verse!]]

Delicate the dreams you don't see

Asleep while you're working You work your death closer

Yeah you're not looking at meeeeeeeeee

Key change (solo?)

2/4 Chorus abridged /verse three

Open Open Open Open

1/4

Eyes (Eyes/eyes/eyes)

What do you see?

Comments

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That is an impressive way to work in Spongebob. Kudos on figuring out that structure with all the time signatures, too!

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using a different time signature for each section is so bold and the result is beautiful! kudos!

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@kosch

Was that a Sponge Bob reference in the second verse?! Wild

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Starting out in 7/8 is a bold move, but it really works!

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There is an intriguing delicacy to the bridge. Love that key change going into the last verse!

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