Through the Haze (*folk)
by @chris_buono
Liner Notes
(*Number 1 of my 14 orig lyrics for my THE FAWMERIZED ALBUM!)
It's said that the mind is a terrible thing to waste, and that every stage of life has its own rewards. So true on paper yet often clouded and unforeseen in the throes of it all. Such was the impetus for this lyric.
#contemplative #contemporaryfolk #indiefolk #folk #acousticguitar #collaborationswelcome #needscollab #needsmusic #needsvocals
Lyrics
In through the out door Nothing ever satisfies All past what has to be Holding court on insanity
Looking for tomorrows And chasing yesterdays Instant forevers All through the haze
Sorrows marching In perfect line How sublime Precious time
And still seeking Blind along the way Brings that happy day
In step with shadow All passage chimes Rooted beyond Evey drawn line
Looking for tomorrows And chasing yesterdays Instant forevers All through the haze
Comments
Hmmm.... #folk , eh? Hmmm... sure it isn't #punkska ? :) Although, acoustic punk in the vein of The Violent Femmes may be the way with this, or even in the vein of their "Good Feeling", bit o piano and acoustic chords, nice sparse violin solo...
However your words, as always, are most excellent. I almost expected an 'up the down staircase' after the first line, but maybe just memories of being in that play inserting themselves? I hope someone puts this to sounds for you, if you want I'll take a stab, you know, I do kind of stab them! :)
Like the message and hook of this lyric. The simple short verses and chorus makes it easy to follow. Great Job!
Really diggin' the chorus... like the whole piece and mood it immediately sets. Thoughts on musical treatment?
I’m really enjoying reading through your lyrics. You have such a great penchant for not forcing a rhyme, but making it catchy and memorable. Very cool.