Your word play and cadence on this is stellar. " if you find me wanting, Then wanting is me" is such a beautiful turn of phrase. I adore your nonsense. I'll truly miss it outside of February. Man, I'm bummed we didn't collab this past February.

Great title and much more chipper than I expected! The naked/pavement couplet was my favorite part of the lyrics. The change in vocal rhythm on the "getting on" sections was a fun twist.

Hey, Danny - what a great song to listen to walking around Central Park where a bunch of little people in YMCA are playing a game with a lot of balls and one is saying “I don’t want to do it” I like the lyric so much. The way they all tumble into the rhythm is fantastic and the words themselves mean a lot to me. Like a theme song for entering the age of being instead of doing. If you’re really thinking about getting rid of all those brilliant lines, I would beg you to let me take a crack at shaping them some more. One thing that could be fun would be to take that phrase The end of señf-improvement and shift it from the end meaning the goal to the end meaning the stopping. With maybe a stop in the middle where there’s some trepidation about when you reach a goal there’s a feeling of being let down.

Your title sucked me in. And I’m very glad that I have listened! Wow you have a very unique perspective and style that is very appealing. Very well done!

Love your use of rhymes in this one. Just discovered you. Will explore a bit more. Where are you from? And where are you living?

Quite philosophical, this one! "The end of self-improvement Is motion without movement"? Nice! Love the vocals here, they're catchy and elating with those little jumps they're doing. Great vibe!

I like this one a lot! Forgive the comparison but it is like Blur recorded a song with BNL. The lyrics are incredible. Great song.

Love the quick rhythm of the way you sing "wanting to be" (among other phrases), there's a fun mix of laid-back pop vibes and urgency here.

So catchy from the first note, this is full of earworms. I love the clever lyrics and your delivery. Agreed with @ttg105 about the naked/pavement line. Listened twice and wanted a third, but time for bed so I can get up and get on.

You pack a lot into a minute or so! Jaunty tune with excellent lyrics that almost bounce off each other. The naked/pavement line is my favorite. The whole song could be about death. Love the "bom boms"!

I love the backing track here, and as Bill said, the song is snappy! The words really resonate with me, and you've pretty much nailed the idea of self-improvement.

Yeah we have the whimsy and pretty music with some hardcore lines there! Well to my reading anyway! Almost subliminal!

I appreciate the sentiment. I really like the the repetitive line "wanting then wanting..." and the "duh duh duh duh die" in the chorus? Bridge?

that's a snappy tune i like the way you go up on some of the short line rhymes. it sets up a false sense of whimsy that draws those in who are looking for a good time. but the conclusion is really rather morbid its "face down on the pavement" climax. even though i saw it coming, it was still a thought when it was explicitly stated. the third want made that line but i wonder if you started with two and then added the third in a spontaneous gestures.