Complete Comfortable
Liner Notes
#soul #rnb #blues #singersongwriter #piano #lovesong #oldschoolvibe I might update this with a legit demo instead of an iphone recording but I want to move onto the next tune so 🤷‍♀️ Lyrics were written by a friend (not a FAWMer) with some small tweaks by me. I dig how the bridge (though cheesy) goes to a key a whole step lower, and then goes back to the original key when the chorus kicks back in... such a cool little trick to make everything feel brighter even though I'm just back to the original key. Did it pretty accidentally and I'm sure I stole it from somewhere, but I plan to keep that in my back pocket.
Lyrics
You’re my complete comfortable. Our spark is palpable. Me and you, my dear Each and every year You’re my complete comfortable. Our spark is palpable. In each and every way, every single day
You're the ship's horn in the darkness. When all I hear are waves. You lit up my heart and soul. I'll be the captain, to your first mate.
CHORUS
You unraveled the tangle behind my eyes When the last knot slipped away Did you see a thousand birds fly I knew with you I'd always stay
CHORUS
Dreaming of our life together The gift of times so sweet and good dancing lights across the water Stamps on a card I'll hand to God
CHORUS
Comments
Oooo…. This is really fine! Love the jazzy bouncy rhythm, the loving warm like a big hug lyrics, and the gorgeous melody as deliveries by your beautiful vocals. Fabulous love song!!!
I really like this, it shines without a full treatment. Nice piano, nice vocal and I love the idea "complete comfortable". Reminds me of my wife.
Would love to hear the legit demo too, but there is actually an aesthetic in the iphone recording too - I kind of like the way it filters the vocals! The lyrics are so sweet and wholesome, and the vocal delivery really lets them shine! Great job!
Very nice!
Such a cool chord progression. The vocals are ace, seems like you jump easily between the registers. You have some soulful depth and a great phrasing. It's been fun to listen to this!
love those chords, hot dang! very nice soulful singing too. really digging this whole vibe. great stuff!
Your title got but the music , your voice and phrasing kept me there. Great job.
Wow! Very good AnD dwingt. So you sign and okay this at the same time live! Not easy.