Chasing The Light

by @smudge

Skirmish: Ordinary objects into met... (@ally_nicole)

Liner Notes

#skirmish #chasingthelight #lifeasanopenroad The object here is the open road and it's meant to symbolize life (as a one way trip).

Lyrics

CHASING THE LIGHT

In an old blue car I drive alone I've come so very far On the open road

Always moving straight I can never stop Donโ€™t ever touch the brake Iโ€™m living lost

Won't look to the left or look to the right Iโ€™m heading out west, I keep chasing the light

In an endless race I'm a fugitive I keep on losing days On this one way trip

Won't look to the left or look to the right I'm heading out west, I keep chasing the light

Rear tire is flapping My mirror is broke But if I stop moving Can't fill up with hope

Won't look to the left or look to the right I'm heading out west, I keep chasing the light

Comments

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Good song! I like the background sounds. Good lyrics. You may have a solid EP after this month, who knows? I would definitely recommend releasing this one.

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Wow, an entire road movie in four verses and a couple of bridges. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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@rtiger8

Poignant lyrics. I feel the emotion on Donโ€™t ever touch the brake.

Certainly my life has felt like the song at times. Broken down, gotta keep moving, chasing something that feels unreachable. Good job.

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i like your style here. stripped down and slowed down rap, also elements of a calm moment in a poetry jam. your song has the feel of a road trip on an endless road, heading west,

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Love how the ambient sound adds to the vibe of the song...racing down a lonely road in a vehicle as the background sound increases and eventually comes to a peak at the very end. I didn't realize until half way through that there's no harmony, not needed! Great job with this. It feels very cinematic as well.

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@dudachris

Fugitive, race, bleak... These lyrics and the overall sound make this feel like a 'Twisted Metal' backstory. I really like it!

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