Drawn Inward
by @mikeymason
Challenge: PALINDROMELiner Notes
My take on the writing challenge "Palindrome".
Lyrics
Drawn Inward.
There it is. All you wanted for? Hunted for? Wanted you… all. Is it there? Therein lurks darkness and pain. Only pain and darkness lurks in there.
Deified. Never odd or even. Never odd or even. Deified.
Therein lurks darkness and pain. Only pain and darkness lurks in there. There it is. All you wanted for? Hunted for? Wanted you… all. Is it there?
Drawn Inward.
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Very cleverly structured lyrics!
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That string drag sound is so interesting and cool! Instantly I was hooked very creepy and powerful. I imagine this would make a great tv show intro soundtrack 👌
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There is a whole lot of depth and food for thought in these sparse but powerful lyrics. I love the chord progressions and your expressive vocal performance, too.
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Very nice use of palindromes! - Natalie