A Mental Revolution
by @zinglizh
Skirmish: inside-out (@fairplay)Liner Notes
Lyrics
When the hidden becomes seen Spilling secrets like ink Erasing old lines of thoughts built on silence We break structures that separate Force opinions to regenerate
Do inside and outside exist Are we in flux if boundaries shift Can we ask what real question is The question Is a revelation a mental revolution
Held beliefs tremble The unshakable crumbles Releasing containment The facts reassemble We unlearn, see anew Let a better truth takes root
Do inside and outside exist Are we in flux if boundaries shift Can we ask what real question is The question Is a revelation a mental revolution
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Your first stanza is really strong with wonderful insight and perspective. Wonderful use of poetic language throughout and great philosophical feel to the end.
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…very nice! - reading it out loud if have the impression this is rather a poem - hope you find time to come back to this again and write some music for it - well done…
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I love the way the lyrics feel in my mouth - the way the vowels and consonants reflect each other and string along into syllables. Wondering if you hear it as punk or metal or something pretty. Sounds tumbling flowy to me.