This Time
by @paulmilne
Challenge: PALINDROMELiner Notes
I wrote this then twigged it would satisfy the Palindrome challenge for obvious reasons.
Just a reflection on how things can change for the better.
Thanks to my partner for letting me use her luthier-made mandolin ... How sweet it is!
#mandolin #palindrome #love #singersongwriter
This Time © 2024 by Paul Milne is licensed under CC BY-SA 4.0. To view a copy of this license, visit https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/
Lyrics
This time It's all gonna be just fine This time No caustic parting line This time
This time Just respect and love This time Neither is above This time
This time Moonlight and sunsets This time No lifelong regrets This time
(Music)
This time No lifelong regrets This time Moonlight and sunsets This time
This time Neither is above This time Just respect and love This time
This time No caustic parting line This time It's all gonna be just fine This time
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Very nice construction. I love the way this flows.
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I was trying to work out the palindrome then it suddenly clicked :) Well constructed lyric, nicely done. Cool mando 😎
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Love the structure of it (nicely palindrome-y). I appreciate the optimism (and somehow the need to repeat and declare it suggests its fragility).