On the Run
by @leavesong
Lyrics
I'm on the run but to nothing. All this age crumbling my bones. You're in love, hey that's something. Look in her eyes and see where it goes.
Oh how I wish I could walk down that street with you, pop into a pub and drink a pint or two, just me and you.
I'm on the run but to nothing. You're so young, the word still hasn't shown. Take good care, make sure it adds up to something. Don't let no job take away your soul.
Comments
Really nicely done fingerstyle guitar - wow - and how it duets with your vocals is very cool. Not sure if this the start of a song or just a one minute song, but I would have loved to hear more. Very nice writing and recording!
Beautiful. I love it. Especially the weird guitar riffs in the middle. Open tuning? Awesome! I understand there are people out there trading their soul for food. This is privileged people talking... like in Pulp's Common People. Very interesting scene crafted here in the lyric. Thanks.
Great tune. Getting some Elliott smith vibes from this in the verses. I like the little guitar hammer on part and the two note chords melody before hitting second verse. Transitions so nicely! I can definitely hear this being longer and maybe some whistling over the main guitar part?