Shiniest Shine
by @kc_
Skirmish: Shine! (@nightwing521)Liner Notes
#needsmusic #needscollab Initially made me think of Shine on Crazy diamond - Pink Floyd - and some other song... anyway... Great Prompt! Really like where it's going! Thanks!
Lyrics
V I I’ll take the sunshine on my face Moonshine in my glass Race you to the river Drop our clothes to the grass
The water’s shiny sparkles Jumping diamonds when we dive Even out uneven tans Make me feel alive
C Shine on, Shine on, Shine on my soul Rainbows of clouds, rolling, roll, roll
V II Feel the moonshine in my head The sunshine round my heart Taken all my loneliness Tore it all apart
With the moonshine from your eyes Those torn pieces from your touch Sewn a quilt of happiness And wrapped me up in love
C Shine on, Shine on, Shine on my soul Rainbows of clouds, rolling, roll, roll
Bridge You’re my shiniest shine I’ve ever seen Gleamiest Gleam, That’s ever been Letting me fall into the light of your life Melting mad shadows apart Opened my eyes with the lovliest light Saved my soul with the light of your heart
Outro Oh shine on, shine on, shine on my soul Rainbows of clouds, rolling, roll, roll Rainbows of clouds, rolling, roll, roll
Comments
This lyric expresses complex feeling that new love evokes: Joyous energy and giddiness, even silliness, the intoxication of physical desire, combined with a deeper sense of discovery and belonging. Genuine love breaks preconceptions and rules--both ours and society's--which is why love can save us. I hope you develop this further. Great skirmish.
Shine on! And a little moonshine after you drop the clothes. Great all the way through!!
I need some even out tan! And I’m missing my swimming pool! So thx very much, good lyric it moves around giving plenty of scope.