Man, you write great choruses. After the faster paced, internal slant rhymes of the verses, the change of melody (with those drawn out notes) in the chorus is mightily effective. Wreckage/message is just awesome. And just when I thought it was safe, you hit us with that bridge. Good writing and composition.

Sometimes you just gotta fuzz things up a bit, and that fuzzy guitar part is great. The vocal’s great, the chorus is super catchy, and the bass line is awesome. It feels complete. Do you like suggestions on things? Some people do, some not so much; your bio says maybe you do..? If you do I had one suggestion and if you don’t, ignore me or tell me and I’ll delete it. The last two lines in the chorus would make the narrative arc of the song more satisfying (to me) if you didn’t repeat the same premise. The through line of the chorus is awesome and really encapsulates the premise of the song, but if the penultimate line was a thing that isn’t the sky but feels like it, possibly a more physical thing like the walls were, the pay-off in the last line would punch harder. Probably just me though, so ignore this, but I mention it, in case it’s useful.

Oh I love this! Your vocals are great and what an interesting mix of textures with the arrangement. I really like the shift at the bridge. I’d add it to my playlist if I could!

This is a cool song! Happy Fawming!

Great melodies throughout. Really like the changes between sections... the strummy verses into the chug chug of the prechorus and then the bridge is a nice change up. Excellent song

Really sweet riff and general guitar sound - the mix of clean and fuzzy sounds lush. Stuffed with hooks and the lyrics are compelling, really need to catch up with Heretic as I keep hearing good things!

Really really good mate! This is one of those rare finds on fawm where it sounds so polished and finished. I love this song. I would buy this album.