Shine Shine Shine
by @lowhum
Liner Notes
This morphs @sapient morph: https://write.fawm.org/songs/310038
Took away everything. Added about 50 %.
#morph #country #acousticonetake
Lyrics
All I want to do
is put you in a shrine
So like a little crazy god
you shine shine shine
Hallowed be thy name, baby scattered by the wind nectar and ambrosia be thy daily drink
Never had no future, baby I was lost at sea Until your angel wings spread all over me
You offered me comfort wiped away my tears Gave me a couple o' kisses And gently disappeared
Comments
Well that's a 180 degree twist! I only get some dark vibes in the lyrics but the style is completely the opposite
This is a cool spin on the previous morph. I really liked your playing and singing too.
This is a great morph - takes things in a completely different direction whilst retaining elements of the previous song. Love the light touch on the guitar, the uptempo fun feel and playful lyrics. Loved it:-)
This was a fun track to morph. Contagious energy in the bouncy verse and chorus. Great playin and singing. Love what you were able to pull from the previous track and make it your own.
I love the direction you took this morph, it drastically changes the tone from the previous song and is light and airy. This is some solid toe tapping goodness. Nice work!
Yup tidy picking! I’m sure I have said before I used to listen to guy on a show many years ago, he played one song each show! This is one he would love to have done. Good stuff.
That's some nice picking you're doing on that guitar. Can't say I expected the morph to go in all of the many directions it has. I like how yours brings us back to (tiki) gods, haha, whether intentional or not.
I liked the title and was curious. What a fun toe tapper. That chorus is aces.
love this Dylan-esque side of you, rarely seen and heard. a beguiling simplicity yet freshness to the lyrics here, coupled with the easygoing guitar. fun!
the chorus is extra special, catchy,memorable, and bursting from tradition into an invigorating present.
OK. I wouldn't have seen this coming...! Definitely a clear morph of the story we're all spinning together 🤩