This is brilliant! It's so true and I am definitely susceptible myself. Great lyrics, and I really love the way that you've and the vocal melody play together. My favorite lines: "Throwing shovelfulls of stuff Into the yawning hole inside"

Wow, this is a skirmish‽ Such an unusual progression and lyrics that feel so tight. This is beautiful thing. “Cultivated impatience” captures this modern disease perfectly. Bravo!!

Great punchline: dig the hole deeper.

Really like how the short lines launch us immediately into the world of instant gratification. And for me, the "yawning hole inside" is just a great description of the terrible void we're all trying so desperately to fill, by shopping or whatever.

We like the word 'askance', 'convenience' was a tough prompt but this is great. Add to cart.

Overconsumption in a nutshell. Great skirmish. The line about putting on pants made me laugh, too. "I only want it because it's so dang convenient" strikes me as a great tag line for a lot of things (ahem tinder...)

"don't look askance"/"...put on pants" is my favorite rhyme of the week! You have such a way with an infectious melody -- love the match between words and music. Well done!

Love this - especially that "lenient / convenient" rhyme!

I need groceries And I don’t want to have to put on pants

People should wear t-shirts with that emblazoned - me included. Oh what are we allowing ourselves into - your chorus about the yawning hole nails it :)

Way to make us all feel guilty.. lol crazy this is where we are at. Everything at our fingertips, some good about that and some bad. I love your approach to the prompt, plain convenience of our time. Nice job

The no pants grocery shopping made me laugh out loud 🤣