I really like these lyrics. They are relatable, and you have many great metaphors in here.

The phrase about giving back my self-doubt brings back a sad memory. Why do we let them do that to us?

This is a bop, and this one of the best songs I've heard from you. It all fits so well together. So well written. Great setting.

First thing I'm struck by is the by the rhythm and instrumentatoin that bounces and floats. A neat base and arrangement.

Some beautiful evocative lyrics. But the lyrics and phrasing really help the whole thing float and are integrated wonderfully. Really strong song, Robyn!

Great imagery throughout! Accomplishing anything fawmtronica in an hour seems like next-level stuff to me. Powerful lyric, solid melody. Nice work!

The whole thing is great--your vocals never fail to impress! I especially like the music; it's catchy and immediate and utterly poppy in a really appealing way that makes we want to keep listening after it's over. Just outstanding!

Hi Robyn, Getting better and better. Nice harmonies. the melody is like a beautiful butterfly playing amongst the wildflowers. What is a FAWMtronica?

Remarkable that this was written so quickly - it sounds like a finished item to me, and a really good track. Mine are a shambles when i spend all day on them.

I hope it grows on you because it got to me straight away. If you're taking suggestions (apologies if not), I'd lose "and my self doubt" - it would sound even chillier.

I really like this.

Dug the appearance of "crystallized tears" in this write--quite a novel phrase and apropos, @robynmackenzie . Interesting trip through this troubled relationship--more than one that just stinks on ice, its frigidness is palpable. Cool write.

That rhythmic synth draws the listener in right from the start. I love the off-beat vocals. And the lyrics are superb, as are the vocals/harmonies. I loved the "ice queen....crown....down" This whole song is a keeper! @klyma makes a very good point - a skirmish captures the energy and innovation of the moment, but performing it live (eventually) will smooth out any rough edges.

A lot of good stuff here. That line about your clothes and self doubt is a keeper!

Re: I don't know that I love this--it felt a little clunky in places when writing it, but maybe it will grow on me.

You can always edit out the clunk later. Play this live and you'll know what must go.

Wonderful song, singing, playing and atmosphere. Fresh and upbeat. Love it❤️

Nice take on the "cold" part of the prompt and I like the electronic beat. Those synths that come in in the second verse give it a lift too - nice variations throughout.

(My brain has just changed ice queen to ice cream when we got to the end. Sorry about that...)

Birthday things, what sort of excuse is that. :-). Ha ha. A good one I guess. I think this is darned good for an hour, nicely paced with all those nice electronic touches.

nice modern electronic sound, the writing is superb and your delivery is spot on. really nice job all round here

That's a lot of song for an hour's work really well done. I like the electronic music, it suits that theme somehow. The line about "you gave me back my clothes and my self doubt" is brilliant lyric writing, the whole things rocks. My first listen this morning, it's worth getting up for!

Sounds great! Really nice voice and harmonies. The music production and lyrics sound really good. Nice job!