Whole
by @smudge
Skirmish: ~for just one second, I f... (@ally_nicole)Liner Notes
Lyrics
Whole
I was here and there I was everywhere Bits and pieces In the atmosphere
I was up and down I was all around Different seasons I was drifting clouds
You took my hand Made me understand How togetherness Solves everything
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Very good brief yet concise lyric. Love the idea that togetherness brings the singer "back to earth" and grounded. Great skirmish!
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Short and powerfull lyrics, I love how the imagery goes from vast and spread out down to a tight here and now (whole) type of feeling. Very cool, creative writing :)
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The rhythmic reading really flows in this touching lyric, well done.
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Very nice. I like the way things turned round in the last verse. Positive outcome!