No Prison

by @smudge

Skirmish: Murder Ballad (@roblyon5150)

Liner Notes

#skirmish I love this prompt!!!

Lyrics

No Prison

We got the concrete shoes Ready to wear We got the supped up coupe Starting to purr

We’re gonna get our man Into the car We’re gonna do our plan As soon as it’s dark

He won’t know - what’s comin’ Behind doors closed - be somethin’ Never gets old - our mission Can only hope - no prison

We been real well paid Raring to go It’s an honest trade Working for dough

Don’t ya diss the mob Removing the scum It’s an honest job So says our mom

He won’t know - what’s comin’ Behind doors closed - be somethin’ Never gets old - our mission Can only hope - no prison

Comments

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@cathreu

I'm far too shy to full on rap but wish I was this brave So much fun on this one. I can see the mobsters cruising, something in the trunk. Cool beat, fun story.

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Loved the vibe, the cool eerie beat!

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This was both scary and hilarious. It could be the theme song for those hired killers in Tarentino's "Pulp Fiction"

"It’s an honest job So says our mom!"

I love this line in so many ways.

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I was hoping I'd hear from you on this skirmish. Good story! Thanks for participating!

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Lol "so says our mom".... That's great. The beat and the piano really works so well here + I love the lyrics justifying what you're doing, and also conveying quite a bit of enthusiasm for it as well! Awesome skirmish.

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Clever lyrics - and I love how the piano drops out while retaining the beat at the end of each chorus. Nice take on the skirmish prompt.

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@alyak72

Cool concept. The trap beat works well with your delivery. I love the little piano line throughout.

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