Whiplash
Skirmish: Bungee (@atornberg)Liner Notes
#skirmish #bungee #blues #rock #retro #piano #girlwithpiano bunjee -> whiplash -> politics -> 🤪
This was fun and my FIRST SKIRMISH! YAY! Thank you @atornberg this was fun :)
Lyrics
We’ve jumped off the ledge With no way to get around This Collective decision We’re Headed straight for the ground
But nature’s at play when you think you’re at the point of no return There the pendulum swing And everyone has their turn
Get ready for the whiplash Get ready for the whiplash at the end of the rope it happens in a flash So get ready for the whiplash
You can only go so far before things snap the other way You don’t have a choice No matter how hard you pray
They say the bigger they are The harder they fall But the physics of politics Effects us all so
So get ready for the whiplash at the end of the rope it happens in a flash So get ready for the whiplash
Comments
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I love your piano playing! Good riffs here. Lyrically it took me awhile to see where the whiplash happens but yes!
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This is so good! I love the sound of that piano and those blues licks are so tasty
Really good song structure, too. Super impressed you were able to pull this together so quickly!
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Awesome riff on the piano, and the vocal performance really sells it. The chorus is super catchy, and the whole thing has a great retro blues/rock energy. This came together great for the time constraints!
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Love this approach musically and the whiplash is a great refrain! Great job for a first or hundredth skirmish! :)
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Crack that whip! Nice take on the prompt! I love the bluesy piano!
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Oh yeah, that's what I'm talking about! First notes from the piano and I thought Carole King. Super jazzy and catchy, foot tapping political commentary, can't get enough!
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Fantastic chorus and the piano is very funky. Great skirmish.
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That's a terrific piano riff and some immediately memorable hooks. Lovely bit writing and great response to the prompt 😍
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Love the upbeat piano riff! Definitely has a retro blues/rock feel to it. Great lyrics, too. Been feeling that kind of whiplash a lot recently.
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Great lyric and message. That whiplash can't come too soon. Love the enthusiasm in the piano and vocal in this. It's wonderfully rousing. Really great melody and performance here. Love it!