You used a skeleton key

by @gordon

Skirmish: Skeleton Key (@jem)

Liner Notes

#dark #skirmish

Nice prompt

Lyrics

You used a skeleton key To work out every piece of me You used a skeleton key And then you broke me

You held the answers close
Unlocked things I’d never chosen
You held the answers close
You left me exposed You had a skeleton key

You whispered secrets in the dark
Started working on my heart You lit my life when it was dark Then you tore me apart

You saw the cracks, exposed the lies
Made me look into your eyes You took me by surprise You left me bleeding there at sunrise You used a skeleton key Made me be me You used a skeleton key

(c) words and music G Todd 2025

Comments

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Fine take on the prompt. I liked the whole thing, but I especially like this couplet “You saw the cracks, exposed the lies Made me look into your eyes “

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@jem

This is great and very well delivered. The idea that someone could use the key to do the damage of exposure/breaking/tearing is a great twist on the more positive concepts of opening up something. I like when you draw out some of the phrases to give more impact. well done.

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@bxphane

Pretty catchy song!

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@jimeddy9

Extremely catchy and a joy to listen to. Thank you!

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Catchy melody and great voice, man!

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@audrey

Great lyrics and use of a metaphor. Not only is this melody catchy, the lyrics are too. A really entertaining song that I enjoyed immensely. Great vocal too.

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