Room Temperature
by @mikegtz
Challenge: PALINDROMELiner Notes
This was left over from the Fearless Songwriting week at the beginning of the month. Couldn't come up with a song idea so now I will put it up for comments first, song later. I also wanted to hit the 20 mark for songs this year. I am primarily a guitar player but I know a little bit of piano too. Hmmm...palindrome, punk rock, double entedre #commentsfirst.
Lyrics
Hot, cold Hot, cold Hot, cold Hot, cold Brrrrrrrrrrrrrrr, Brrrrrrrrrrrrr
Cold,hot Cold,hot Cold, hot Cold,hot Brrrrrrrrrrrrrr, Brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
What's room temperature When you're close to me? Is it my pencil point Or your cavity?
Hot, cold Cold, hot Hot, Cold Cold, Hot Brrrrrrrrrrrrr, Brrrrrrrrrrrr
I am leaving No,you're not No, you're not I am leaving No, you're not No, you're not I am leaving
Goodbye, February Album Writing Month
Comments
No, that wasn't the shower, that was tape hiss...lol
Experimental, weird, and completely follow the comments first spirit. Did you actually have the shower running in the background?
what a cool way to interpret the "palendrome" challenge from week 1! the palendromic song structure with the bridge right there in the middle was super clever.
Mike, the lyrics made me stop and admire the double entendre! It's like you read your listener's thoughts.
That punk strumming pattern really brings the energy!
Nice way to end the month with this song, well, actually "No, you're not". Great song.