Garlic Girl
Skirmish: Happy Endings (@atornberg)Liner Notes
Was originally going to write a tender and sincere song likening my life before meeting my partner to that of a lonely cloud drifting through life
and then I thought of the line "garlic girl" and followed it with "allicin angel" and had to do a 180
Sometimes that's the breaks
Anyways, fairly straightforward song of endeerment. My partner and I cook a lot and she loves alliums (onions, garlic, etc), cheese, reading, etc.
Also, we're both vegetarians living in Somerville, hence Vegetable Villen
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Allicin
Lastly, neither of us can fly a plain but I needed a line there so now she can!
Lyrics
Garlic: Your garlic girl my allicin angel my spicy little friend
You stir my pot And that's not all your my happy end your my happy end
Cheese: My curd nerd my cheesy charmer you could land a plane
you book worm you vegetable villen you light up my brain you light up my brain
Onion: My Vidalia Darling You're so sweet you'd never make me cry
You cut me up and with some luck I'll always be your guy I'll always be your guy
Comments
The food imagery ties this together so well -- I love how you went with where the prompt took you, and it went straight to your stomach. The giggle and smile in your "mistakes" of your demo feel great, I can tell you had fun making this and that's a great skirmish result.
Nice food imagery that I can almost smell. This is a well-written ode to a love interest. Good work!
Love this... different perspectives! Love how the book worm lights up your brain.
I love that you went with the off-the-cuff take! The laugh shows that you were having a great time, and now I'm having a great time. This ones a comical swooner!