You're a Shapeshifter
by @sheilerk
Skirmish: Cats (@ajna1960)Liner Notes
#lyricsonly #cat #shapeshifter
I clicked on the last skirmish and saw the prompt was celebration. Since I had already done one with a prompt of Joy and Celebration I thought I'd go back to an earlier prompt and do that, so I chose cat, and shapeshifter, and this was the result.
Lyrics
I looked at you in the morning The light kissing your hair, The golden flecks within your eyes So beautiful and rare.
I saw you in the evening, You didn't seem to care, No light to burnish you with gold, I could only stand and stare.
You're a shapeshifter First light and then you're dark, You're a shapeshifter, I don't know who you are.
Coming out of the shadows, A black panther on the prowl, You flash your startled eyes at me, I almost hear you growl.
But when you bask in the sunlight You're a lion with a golden mane, Either way you're a big cat, Wild and untamed.
You're a shapeshifter, First light and then you're dark, You're a shapeshifter. I don't know who you are. I don't know who you are.
Comments
I love it ! You caught me with the second verse, where the rhymes evoke the first verse. Beautiful depiction of a cat ! I could imagine the feline move between lights and shadows while reading your lyrics.
Great lyrics to capture the ever shifting feline! - Natalie
Miaow! Miaow! Your feline masters will be pleased with you oh can opener!
We never know who are cats are. Excellent choice to,combine these. A bit weird for me since we have one cat who looks like a small black panther and one who looks like a lion. I THINK they are two cats but one never knows with cats, do you?
Beautiful lyrics and thoughts ✨️
I love how you’ve woven the imagery of light and shadow to reflect the complexity of this shapeshifter. Nice write!! #tit4tat
This is very cool. I like the idea of cats, but I also think this could be about a person - kind of reminds me of some of the bloke characters in Joni Mitchell songs, they can be all cheerful and loving some of the time but there's a dark side that ultimately gets in the way of a successful relationship. It's a great idea for a song. #tit4tat
Oh, I like this one. Thanks for coming to my skirmish asynchronously!
If any animal can be a shapeshifter then cats are it. Some make you wonder who is the most intelligent creature in the room lol. Can hear Suzanne Vega singing this. Cheers
Whoa, these are some super cool lyrics! I like the chorus a lot, it brings out an uncertainty in the reader, though not necessarily the bad kind.
Oh, these are lovely lyrics Sheila! Brilliant use of shapeshifter and different kinds of cats! And YOU know your cats, right? Awesome chorus and your verses are structured so tightly! Great work (as always!!!) #tit4tat
Cats have this mystical aura to them. You have captured that here in a wonderful way. You also capture the dual nature of cats as the soft friendly furballs and apex predators represented here as the interplay between night and day. Very cool concept! #tit4tat
Really enjoyed the split between morning/evening and the shift in imagery. The line about the light kissing your hair is especialy nice.
I love this! I can't seem to write a serious cat song - all of mine are very silly. This is so pretty!