the saddest song i've written in my entire life

by @beninahouse

Liner Notes

i was in a really dark place when i wrote this. #piano #waltz #sad

Lyrics

everyone at the club was getting so turnt so turnt everyone hit the quan and did other trendy dance moves

i didn't get to go i had homework homework i didn't do it before it took me all night i cried

everyone at the club was taking selfies and stuff everyone did the nae-nae the dab and the whip what fun

i didn't get to go i had homework homework i didn't do it before and it took me all night i cried

Comments

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Brilliant bit of theatre, this, well worth the effort, and the use of varied time and emotion in the presentation absolutely makes it!

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The FOMO hits strong. I can relate to the narrator. Not sure how, just I can empathise in a way.

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Like a mix of Rufus Wainwright and Bare Naked Ladies... Solid song!

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@fuzzy

You didn't even get to do The Whip. How sad is this?? You know, I used to be a teacher. Now I regret ever giving homework.

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I like the simple trudging piano as a backing for your very emotional vocal delivery, slowing down towards the end of the line to give the vocal performance a feeling of hesitancy. Feels like something to listen to on a rainy day after getting splashed by a nearby car. Great work!

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