I love where this is going. I want to hear it after you put a vocal on it!

Powerful lyrics and a good guitar melody. Would like to hear it all put together.

Love the feel of this -- the chords echo the sentiments in the lyric so nicely, Lyrically, "Drawn to the edge of the world" is compelling, and I love "Deep in the ashes an ember alights / Fanned by a breath, to rekindle afresh" and the hope it delivers.

Lovely bassy acoustic you have there, and an interesting lyric. Looking forward to the final version.

Every line is an evocative, creative image of rebirth and renewal. Excellent poetry. Deft rhyming of 'world'!

I love the guitar melody. It gives me the feeling of someone telling you a story over a fire. Beautiful and great guitar playing

Great guitar melody and very cool lyrics… looking forward to hearing the finished version.

ar the waltz lead off I'm in! very Elliot Smith! nice deep lyric sitting waiting! nice one.

These lyrics are great! I can’t wait to hear them over this lovely guitar.

nice guitar and chord progression. kinda wish a raspy voice on it but is good

Ditto what @jeremykazoo said, Tres. Great guitar tone, too.

It reminds me of Joseph Campbell "Hero with A Thousand Faces." Great job!

I found myself singing your lyrics as the song played and really enjoyed that experience. The choice of chords really goes well with the lyric and the Skirmish prompt.

Great lyrics. Enjoyed your guitar playing too.

Very poetic lyrics

I really love your images and use of language in this fine lyric. And could sing it in my head to the chord progression! Flows well with a magical mysterious quality perfect for the prompt!

Excellent lyric and the guitar setting is promising - look forward to hearing it when you've tied it together! 😊