You Go First

by @ballyhoot

Liner Notes

Not sure I'll be doing much FAWMing but this song has been bouncing around in my head all January and I decided I needed to finish it and record it. Didn't feel like breaking out my usual home studio stuff, such as it is, so this was recorded on my bed after I woke up using my phone's GarageBand app, two acoustic guitars, one shaker egg, a harmonica, and 2 vocal tracks.

#acoustic #harmonica #folk #americana #dylanesque #cynical

Lyrics

Let's put away our guns And hold out our hands Let's show all the world That we can

Lets try chasing peace Instead of causing the worst I'm glad you agree Now you go first

I'm all for doing what’s right As I'm sure you are too And there are steps we can take me and you

Let's embrace all what heals And reject everything that hurts I'm glad we agree Now you go first

We can share what we got And open up our arms Let's try to do some good Instead of harm

So let's reject greed And empty out our purse I'm glad you agree Yeah you go first

Comments

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This shows the problem about taking action very well. There are a lots of inspirational ideas and actions when people are talking, when it comes to action nobody or very few step forward. "You go first". what a brilliant song. I really like the vocal melody. It has a undescribable authority to it.

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great sentiment.

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I love how you're pointing out the stumbling blocks in searching for the solutions to all the problems in the world. There's no doubt we NEED to work together to make things better and there's no doubt that it isn't easy to solve all the world's problems. But if we each did our little part suddenly the world would be a better place. Yeah, you go first. The arrangement works perfectly for this. I dig this a lot.

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Great hook, and what a twist to the theme. This sort of twist aligns perfects with the instrumentation and the harmonic solo. I'm shaking my head yes at the start, yes yes, yes and then... "now you go first", and i'm just a total loss from there forward, or so i thought, because as you break into each verse I'm just hypnotized back into believing everything you say until the hook hits me again and I realize that I've been deceived again. A perfect take on the state of the word it would seem.

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@markg

"you go first"--send me a text when you're done. Strong concept for a hook. Catching writing and I like your classic Americana vocal sound.

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@figure8

Powerful stuff - vocals, guitar and harmonica all work really well. And the lyrics are great, "I'm glad we agree - now you go first" hits hard every time it drops. Nice work

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The "you go first" line is potent. Really great to hear you!

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Really good write, I really enjoyed how you brought it to life with a cutting edge

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Sounds great given the recording technique. Nice strong vocal performance.

"Now you go first"one of my favourite reposts.

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Really love the strum pattern, fits the vocal line super well

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My son said, "This song should go in one of the Minions movies. It's really good." I agree. Not about the Minions. Great place to put a harmonica too!

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Strong message and I love your vocal tone.

"Now you go first" is a strong line

The vocal doubling in verse two really lifts it up. And then a harp sounding like steam train, heaven.

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i love the sardonic title and how it fits into the verses. good strong strumming and powerful yet controlled vocals make this an exciting listen.

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