Eons
by @shuttlebat
Liner Notes
I've been contemplating the idea of generational nostalgia - the moments where an experience you're having feels familiar and comforting, mainly because it's an experience that we as humans have experienced for as long as we have been humans, more or less. This partly ties to the lines in Susan Coopers' poem The Shortest Day, "Through all the frosty ages you can hear them /Echoing behind us ‐ listen! /All the long echoes, sing the same delight, /This Shortest Day"
This is very much me knocking off the rust of the year, and I don't have a melody in mind yet, but I like the rhythm of it.
Lyrics
Can you hear them? Listen, listen Echoing the day to day Ringing hours through the ages Calm from centuries away
Snoring kittens in the corner Wind that stirs the dancing flame Raindrops pooling by the doorstep Voices lifting, songs proclaimed
Can you feel them? Hold your hands out Reaching fore and back in time Memories are strong imprinted Wrapping fast like flowering vines
Dough pressed strongly 'gainst the counter Fingers warmed on mugs of tea Fog that clings to you like cobwebs Diving deep into the sea
Can you see them, faintly glimmer? Joy from generations past Sparking the familiar feelings Pictures aged, but colorfast
Snowflakes lifting on the windgusts Sunrise cresting pale and blue Flowerbuds that dot the hill sides Threaded stitches holding true
Moonlight shining, heavy drumbeats, Blushing skin and love to hold Cresting hills that lead you homeward Teaching skill to young from old
Moments fleeting, from tradition Tethered between then and now Mother's mirror, father's fable Branches grow as roots allow
As you walk through time's advancing, Feeling you've been here before Ripple through the lives behind you Nostalgia through the eon's yore
Comments
Nice wordsmithing here! Snoring kittens in the corner, indeed!
I definitely can hear the rhythm, and lots of great images here to give this a "back in the day" folklore feel. I like the mix of metaphors and very real snapshots.