moon in strange world / mond in fremder welt
by @mahtowin
Liner Notes
Every FAWM or 5090 I post a poem for you to work with - if you want to. If these words speak to you somehow you are heartly invited to bring them to your music. In any language you like to!
You are also invited to put out some lines or an image, work with them and create something new!
I'll use them later on in one of my/our songs.
Hope you like it! you find the English translation below.
Lyrics
Wie ein Mond in einer fremden Welt leuchtet die Hagebutte rot aus den Zweigen der Wildrose
stille Schönheit im gefrorenen Nebel
Ich atme meinen Schlaf aus ein gefrorener Traum kristallener Zauberwald Seifenblasen im Eis
Die Zeit verweilt hier
Wir laden sie ein sich auszuruhen
zwischen Eiskristallen bauen wir ihr ein Bett aus Rabenfedern
Like a moon in a strange world the rose hip shines red from the branches of the wild rose
silent beauty in frozen fog
I breathe out my sleep a frozen dream crystal enchanted forest Soap bubbles in the ice
Time lingers here
We invite to rest
between ice crystals we build her a bed made of raven feathers
Comments
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Moon poems are among my favorites and I hope it gets music!
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Gorgeous enchanting poetry.
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Das habe Ich shön gefühlt in Nebel und Schnee. Welche Verwunderung ! Knuspriger Text.
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This is a beautiful poem. So evocative :)
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This conjures up so many mysterious and colorful images in my mind. I particularly like "silent beauty in a frozen fog" and "soap bubbles in the ice" and "a bed made of raven feathers." It's as if someone captured an icy forest at night and made it into poetry. Love it!
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I love the opening lines so much. I stopped, smiling, and thought about them for a bit before proceeding. The whole thing is lovely, so concretely visual and somehow ethereal at the same time. I'm leaving for Mexico soon, but I might try to do something with these words :)
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i cant imagine anybody singing this poem better than you. perhaps you can bring it to fruition with pennyfeather.