Acapella Demo 2: Your Vision

by @javakat343

Liner Notes

Lyrics

(Verse) Why do you think this way? You think people just don't change But I know I have so much

I used to be scared of heights I couldn’t do what I liked I hadn’t known true love

And I still havn’t but Now that I let the shame end I’ve started talking again I let go of this grudge

[Who let you decide?]

(Chorus) I’m not exhausting Your just exhausted Irrisponsable You just judge my decisions As you would do But I’m not you And I’ll never be I don’t follow your vision

Of whats Punk Rock Or responsible I’ve encountered my own obstacles

You couldn’t understand Cuz you won’t understand…. …Me.

(verse) I cut my hair today we’re not friends anymore You don’t know yet But you think I’m a bore

Its more apt to say “Shes so fun but a pain” All these thoughts in my brain You think they're all the same.

Comments

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@cts

Wow - I like how you put so much energy right out the gate. For some reason I was thinking this would be a slow burn of sorts, but no, you reminded me of Linda Jones's powerhouse vocal showcase on quite a few of her records. What you have to say her resonates on a few levels. Excellent!

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You've sung this with so much power, I'm a believer! Great start! A favorite line is "I cut my hair today/we’re not friends anymore"

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Cool song! Your melody is really strong and the “judge my decisions”/“follow your vision” line has the makings of a great hook with some bluesy harmony set against it. Nice 😀

[FAWM]