Thanks @wobbiewobbit that's so kind. Hope to see you in London 🤞

love this! Def not too many bv's. The sound has such a charm. lovely easy drifting melody, i agree with the syd barrett comment, also i thought a bit Beatles, whatever, it is lovely! enjoyed it twice :)

really nice- very musical and evokes a very vivid place (even tho I've never been, ) - and the demo and piano playing have a great sound thats perfect for this....great job!

Great lyrics. I love the piano sound and the Syd Barrett-esque vocal. Really cool! Ha! Love the ending!

By the time I got to the middle section I was getting musical vibes. And I really want to know what she/he just said. Great structure here. I might try out this chord progression too. Love your phrases and rhyming and melody etc. And I like the images you conjure up. Great writing. And the ending made me laugh

So lovely. Your graceful singing and phrasing over that natural room reverb with the piano creates a mood that feels nostalgic and comfy as an old quilt by a fireplace. I've traveled a fairly ridiculous amount in my life, but somehow I've not been to Scotland. I should, since I'm always falling in love with sort of underappreciated Scottish pop artists like Trashcan Sinatras and such. If I ever do, this will inspire me to take a walk in Portobello.

Very nice I really enjoyed that. Reminded me of being 10 and shipped off to my old aunt and uncle and sifting through their record collection for 1960s pop music, but every record sounded just like this! Then, bored stiff and trying to play Beatles songs on their piano and every one sounded like this! But now I'm their age I love this sound for the memories. Those lyrics are great as well, like being a young man in love

There is such a lovely strolling tempo to this. I adore that big old parlour piano - it has so much warmth over digital and I think that's apt for this song. And your chords are superb. The ones in the chorus with all the 7ths and diminisheds is so cool.

Oh, I love this melody! Pachelbel had it right. This is a great chord progression. I'm going to try writing a piece, myself, using this chord progression. Lovely song. Well done!

This is the sweetest thing! I often wonder why people don't seem to be writing simple, beautiful songs like this anymore --- but obviously they do!!! Your lyrics suit the style perfectly, and hint at intimacy without being all in your face --- wonderful stuff! (I laughed out loud at the very end....)

Some wise and heartfelt lines in here. Definitely worth keeping and developing past the one take.

There's always new life in those old chords if you know how to draw it out. You've done that. It's a memorable tune. My favourite lines are the middle bit about the snowdrops and how the rest will follow, so don't worry about tomorrow. That's a brilliant couple of lines, actually, taking a simple, annual phenomenon of nature and making it mean something deep. I also like the ambiguity of You saying what you just said - and leaving it there.