Paradise

by @luxury

Liner Notes

This is one I could've kept fiddling with forever but I wanted to wrap up whatever I had before the superbowl! #synthpop

Lyrics

Isn't it crazy how time stands still in paradise Captivated by feeling nice Aren't you glad that you rolled the dice?

Comments

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I love where the music goes, a fun composition.

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I like this a lot!! the square-ish synth tone is very good and I dig the glockenspiel a lot in the arrangement. one of my favorite types of song is long ones that have one tiny bit of vocal, and this suits that very well to me.

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Really neat track, from the very first second! The unusual chord selections kept my interest, and it's pretty neat to only have a few words of lyrics at the end of the song.

I totally get the desire to stamp a song 'DONE' in order to stay on track with FAWM, and that's kind of the beauty of this challenge! I appreciate that I don't have time to be too precious with the songs I'm making and just get them out the door. March is for polish!

Speaking of polish, I could definitely hear the lyrics benefiting from more elaboration from a production standpoint. Maybe harmonies, or delays or something.

Keep up the great work. Looking forward to hearing more!

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@seb

This is cool, nice groove and I dig the imperfection of it all. There synth melody interplaying with the rhythm chords is very well done. Good job on the on/off synth and percussive little harmonies and arpeggios. Somehow you manage to keep the song unfolding and going to new places.

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This is a really nice groove. I love the bass line in particular, and the arrangement around it really grows nicely. Great job!

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